IELTS Writing task 2 – Discussion essay

1. Introduction

• Paraphrase the question. (Diễn giải câu hỏi)
• State two supporting reasons. (Nêu hai lý do hỗ trợ)
• Give your opinion. (Đưa ra ý kiến ​​của bạn)

 2. Body

Main body paragraph 1

• Topic sentence – outline the view you don’t agree with. (Câu chủ đề – phác thảo quan điểm mà bạn không đồng ý)
• Explain why this view is held by some people. (Giải thích tại sao quan điểm này được giữ bởi một số người)
• Give an example. (Đưa ra một ví dụ)

Main body paragraph 2

• Topic sentence – outline the view you do agree with. (Câu chủ đề – phác thảo quan điểm mà bạn đồng ý)
• Explain why this view is held by some people. (Giải thích tại sao quan điểm này được giữ bởi một số người)
• Give an example. (Đưa ra một ví dụ)

4. Conclusion

Summarise the key points and state your opinion. (Tóm tắt những điểm chính và nêu ý kiến ​​của bạn)

II. Sample

Topic: Some people believe that technology has made our lives too complex. Others argue that it has made our lives easier and more convenient. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Introduction:

In today’s society, technology has become an integral part of our daily lives. While some people argue that it has made our lives easier and more convenient, others believe that it has made our lives too complex. This essay will explore both sides of the argument and ultimately argue that although technology has brought about certain complexities, its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

Body Paragraph 1:

Those who believe that technology has made our lives too complex argue that it has led to information overload, decreased face-to-face communication, and increased dependence on devices. For example, individuals may struggle to disconnect from work emails and notifications, leading to burnout and stress. Furthermore, social media and instant messaging have replaced in-person conversations, making it difficult to develop strong social skills.

Body Paragraph 2:

On the other hand, proponents of technology argue that it has made our lives easier and more convenient in countless ways. For instance, smartphones have allowed us to stay connected with loved ones no matter where we are, while online shopping has eliminated the need to leave our homes. Moreover, many technological advancements in medicine and science have saved countless lives and improved our quality of life.

Body Paragraph 3:

Despite some of the complexities that technology has brought about, I believe that the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks. We cannot deny the fact that technology has revolutionized the way we live and work, making our lives more efficient and convenient. However, it is important that we use technology in moderation and maintain a healthy balance between our digital and real-world lives.

Conclusion:

In conclusion, while some may argue that technology has made our lives too complex, it is clear that it has also brought about numerous benefits. As long as we use technology responsibly and in moderation, it can greatly enhance our lives and improve our wellbeing.